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Why do I pain
When it was I
Who left.

Why do I feel
Lost
Without you by my side.

Why am I
Crying
If I made the choice.

Why do I hunger
For you
Though I let you go.

I never realized
How important you were
Until you've gone.

Now I want you back
Back by my side
But I cannot find you.

Never again
Shall I see your face.
Or hear your quiet laugh.

I've hurt you
Too deep
Stabbed you too hard.

That sweet love
We once had
Is gone.

Our love is lost
'Cause I didn't treasure.
I threw away what mattered most.
A poem on dumping someone you loved and then realizing that they were the most important thing to you.

A poem based on Written Emotion's prompt Lost Love.
Or was based on that prompt.

But since I can't submit the poem to Written Emotion's prompt I have decided to submit it to da Literature's weekly themes contest instead. The theme is: Lost.

If you liked this poem please vote for it here: [link]
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fillet-o-fish-07 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
it is a painful lost indeed... well done =]! your poem's really good =]
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angelwbrokenwings Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
You really captured all the conflicting emotions that come with love very nicely!
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
Thank you :D.
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:iconartandattitude:
artandattitude Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Student Photographer
Is this purely fictional or is there any basis to it?
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010
Mostly fiction, happened to me once but it wasn't as bad.
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artandattitude Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Student Photographer
I can tell you that the people who were dumped hurt just as much and if they talk maybe it can exist again.
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010
Yeah I know that :).
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DarkMatery Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
voted for you!:D
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010
Thanks :D.
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DarkMatery Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
you are welcome!
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