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Cold sweat dwells
Heart beats thump.
I'm shaking
Shivering.

I'm alone in the dark
With demons surround.
I am alone I've been alone,
Ever since you left me.

How I yearn,
For your comfort
Your warmth
And your hugs.

I was safe
When you held me.
I was brave
With you by my side.

Now I am
Fragile,
Alone,
And weak.

I'm vulnerable
There is no one
To protect me,
To ease my fear.

I stand alone
In the dark.
A poem I wrote inspired by a nightmare.
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DarkJanet Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have a terrible nightmare in the middle of night. Wanna talk about it?
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TheLoudestSilence13 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is good :)
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DarkFuryPhantom Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011
Good job!
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Foreststone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I've wrote a poem about a nightmare haven't posted it on DA though, it's a completely concept though :)
Also you did an awesome job writing this :D
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
Thank you :D.
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unknown-loner Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
another great one!! =D
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
:) Thanks :D :hug:.
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:iconbecules:
becules Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
wow that's really good! must've been a really scary nightmare!!!
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
Yeah it freaked me out :D.
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:iconbecules:
becules Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
what was it about?
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
Some curse...it sounds stupid now :|
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:iconbecules:
becules Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
hmm...sounds interesting and i no how that can feel :)
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
:D Dreams just get dumb 3 mins after you dream it :).
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:iconrequishna:
requishna Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist
except for the ones based on real life nightmares... like several of mine :(

excellent work, I loved reading this.
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:iconbecules:
becules Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
that is so true! haha :)
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Trinity17 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aww...I'll hold you. :huggle:
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
Aww, that's the cutest comment I've ever received :aww:.
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:icontrinity17:
Trinity17 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: Well...I try.
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phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
:hug: :D
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Trinity17 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhurrplz:
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:iconaustinossy:
austinossy Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
thats amazing
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
Thank you :D.
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:iconaustinossy:
austinossy Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
thats amazing
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
That's a repeated comment, but thanks again.
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:iconaustinossy:
austinossy Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
hw long have u been a poet
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
Half a year...maybe less, I just developed a interest in poetry so not very long.
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Dare143Devil Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
what i go through pretty much every night T_T
well written! (:
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
That sucks, but thank you :).
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:icondare143devil:
Dare143Devil Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
yeah, no problem :D
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MichaelOrtega Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010   Traditional Artist
extreme angst well written!
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
Thank you :heart:.
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MichaelOrtega Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010   Traditional Artist
of course :hug:
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