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Cold sweat dwells
Heart beats thump.
I'm shaking
Shivering.

I'm alone in the dark
With demons surround.
I am alone I've been alone,
Ever since you left me.

How I yearn,
For your comfort
Your warmth
And your hugs.

I was safe
When you held me.
I was brave
With you by my side.

Now I am
Fragile,
Alone,
And weak.

I'm vulnerable
There is no one
To protect me,
To ease my fear.

I stand alone
In the dark.
A poem I wrote inspired by a nightmare.
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DarkJanet Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have a terrible nightmare in the middle of night. Wanna talk about it?
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TheLoudestSilence13 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is good :)
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DarkFuryPhantom Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011
Good job!
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Foreststone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I've wrote a poem about a nightmare haven't posted it on DA though, it's a completely concept though :)
Also you did an awesome job writing this :D
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
Thank you :D.
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unknown-loner Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
another great one!! =D
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
:) Thanks :D :hug:.
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becules Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
wow that's really good! must've been a really scary nightmare!!!
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:iconphantomflamz:
phantomflamz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
Yeah it freaked me out :D.
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becules Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
what was it about?
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